The bus shelter smelled like wet cardboard and someone's spilled energy drink. I'd been waiting eleven minutes—not ten, not fifteen—because I kept checking my phone, as if the number 42 would materialize faster if I refreshed the transit app one more time. A woman beside me was reading a paperback with a creased spine, the kind of damage that comes from being loved too hard. I caught a glimpse of the title: The Hands We Hold. She turned a page without looking up, and I wondered what scene she was living in while I was stuck in mine.

There was a moment—brief, almost missable—when our eyes met. She smiled, or maybe just softened her mouth in that way people do when they're acknowledging another human without committing to conversation. I smiled back, or tried to. Then she returned to her book, and I returned to my phone, and the moment collapsed into the past tense.

I've been thinking about moments like that. The ones that don't mean anything but feel like they should. The ones where nothing happens, but you're aware of the nothing happening. I read somewhere that most of life is waiting—for buses, for results, for someone to text back, for the feeling that you're doing it right. And in the waiting, we convince ourselves that the thing we're waiting for will be the thing that matters.

The bus came. She got on first, tapped her card, moved to the back. I followed, tapped mine, stood near the middle. We didn't look at each other again. She got off three stops before I did, and I watched her walk away, still reading, her finger holding her place. I wondered if she'd remember me, the person who smiled at her in the bus shelter, or if I'd already dissolved into the background noise of her Tuesday.

When I got home, I tried to write a story about two strangers who meet at a bus stop and change each other's lives. I got three sentences in and deleted them all. Some moments aren't meant to be storified. Some moments are just moments—quiet, ordinary, and true in a way that fiction never quite manages to be.

Maybe that's the point. Maybe the story isn't the thing we make up afterward. Maybe it's the eleven minutes of waiting, the creased paperback, the smile that didn't quite land, the awareness of being alive at the same time as someone else, even if only for a breath.

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